Monday, August 20, 2012

The Monkey's Paw

Class,

 For homework tonight don't forget to read The Bridegroom on page 59 and answer questions 1-5 on page 64. After reading some of the short stories in our class, what makes a GREAT short story? Post your response and respond to 1 or more classmates. Here's a video clip about The Monkey's Paw.
Post by 10p.m.

40 comments:

  1. I believe that intense and adventurous stories are interesting. A good short story is a story with a lot of communication between the characters.

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    1. I agree with you ^Perla but i also think there should be good suspense.

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  2. What makes a good short story is alot of details. What this means is, there are intense and other events to surround the short story. A good story is very mysterious.

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    1. agreed about the details. the more detailed the more the author can take the reader INSIDE the story.

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    2. Yes i agree with both of you guys. The more detailed the story, the more each reader will picture the setting and plat as if it was right in front of their faces.

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    3. A lot (two words not one *alot)...Shemarr what do you mean by intense?

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  3. you know to me, it all depends what the short story is about. if its a short horror story then its expected to have a lot intensity, irony, and a lot of the stuff we talked about in class. if it were a romance then there should be love, passion. But as i said, it all depends what kind of short story it is. it mainly has to stick to whats it about and details. that could possible be the key to a great short story. DETAILS

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    1. yeah thats a good point aaron , Details is key to completing a great short story . But you dont want to many details becuase then it gets to complicated and you kinda loose intrest .

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  4. What makes a good short story is a story that has suspense, terror, and some drama. I think this is something that makes a story very interesting and keep readers entertained. A good story can also have romance, fiction and more, but to me suspense, terror, and drama are the 3 things that make a good story. I also believe that a short story should have a moral so we can learn from that and don't make the same mistakes they made.

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    1. I totally agree with you those are the most important things.

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  5. To me a great short story has to consist of suspense and thiller. Has to keep the reader intertained pretty much at all times . A short story also must contain a good plot , but you have to stay to the point you can't keep on changing the central idea of the short story . if you do change the central idea it gets the reader confused and less interested in the story

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    1. I agree with this. I think a short story is about keeping a reader entertained and suspense and thriller are the things that keep a reader entertained most of the time.

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    2. You are totally right it should feature a good plot because it makes the reader understand more.

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  6. I think a short story should grab the readers attention the very first moments and drive towards a sudden, unexpected revelation.

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  7. i think that a great short story has to have suspense and horror. i think it needs horror because it makes it more readable. i also think it needs suspense because it keeps the reader reading.

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    1. True...but you can still have suspense without horror

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    2. I agree, a short story will be a good story if people pay a lot of attention.

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    3. I agree with you juan a great short story ha to have horror and suspense because the horror brings that emotion of fear and suspense because it brings the action to the story or film.

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    1. i think that what makes a good short story is the details and the suspence, the auther gives.

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  9. In my opinion i think what makes a good short story is the theme that the reader is hooked on at the beginning. i Mean yea the suspense and action can help it make it unique, but for me i think the theme is more important.

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    1. You don't figure out the them until the end of the story hahaha !!!

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  10. I think a good short story is a story that has to keep the reader entertained, with good details, ans should also have suspense.

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  11. What makes a great short story is a story that has suspense,details and a lot of mystery.The story should begin with a character and a setting.It is a great way to start with. It makes it great throughout the story because it's more interesting.It should have a well chosen point of view and what the main character thinks and feels.It should have a conflict and tension.This is what a short story should feature.

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  12. In my opinion a really good short story needs to have suspend,
    that will keep the reader more interesting on what they are reading. I also think the story needs to have really good details that will help understand the story better.

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  13. In my opinion, i think what makes a good short story is action and horror. These are two things to keep a reader very well entertained.

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  14. I think it duuz kinda get our attention bout the story but its true it seems like it needs more suspens

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  15. I think a good short story is a story that gets you sucked into the story leaves you wondering what will happen next.

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  16. Yeah I agree with u sylvia


    And I think a short story should have something the grabs the readers attention but also have them thinking at the same time

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  17. "The paw of the monkey makes the movie so mysterious and it’s kind of weird for me because you can make wishes on a preserved paw of a monkey. I believe what makes the movie so intense and suspenseful is the last part of the movie when the son’s his voice was muted while wishing makes the movie suspenseful.

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  18. I think what makes a good short story is having creativity towards your characters and the story itself . For me it should have suspense horror and thrill , thats all i have to say about shortstories Mr G.

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  19. i think what makes a great short story is that it has to keep the audience entertained by having suspense and actually going somewhere.

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  20. I think a short story has to be complete with details and understandable!!

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  21. i agree with maria the story has to keep the audience thinking that way there will be something to look forward to rather than knowing how it ends and just be bored with the rest of the information...

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  22. I think what makes a good short story is the characters, the setting and the suspense. I really like that we've read to great suspense full stories and we wrote the ending to them.

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    1. Good characters?? I think that makes no sense what so ever. The only thing I agree with you is that the author or story has to make the reader think about what's going on.

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